03-03-2010 16:43
Hi everyone.
I have a lot of work those days and no time to post. I wrote one topic yesterday. Here it is
Question. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Outline.
Disagree
- chance to prove yourself
- first sight
Conclusion-both
Although some people think that all you need for success is hard work, I strongly disagree that luck has nothing to do with it.
I believe that despite all that hours of hard working you still need a chance to prove yourself and only luck can give you such opportunity. I always rely on luck when I'm going to take an exam or to be interviewed for a new job.
Because when an employer sees you for the first time he does not know yet how hard you have worked and that only depends on luck whether they will ask you a question on a familiar topic.
In conclusion, I think that success is created not only by luck and hard work. It also depends on your talent, charm, ability to resist stress and self-confidence.
I have a lot of work those days and no time to post. I wrote one topic yesterday. Here it is
Question. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Outline.
Disagree
- chance to prove yourself
- first sight
Conclusion-both
Although some people think that all you need for success is hard work, I strongly disagree that luck has nothing to do with it.
I believe that despite all that hours of hard working you still need a chance to prove yourself and only luck can give you such opportunity. I always rely on luck when I'm going to take an exam or to be interviewed for a new job.
Because when an employer sees you for the first time he does not know yet how hard you have worked and that only depends on luck whether they will ask you a question on a familiar topic.
In conclusion, I think that success is created not only by luck and hard work. It also depends on your talent, charm, ability to resist stress and self-confidence.
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Sofico
03-03-2010 16:57
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Maybe you change "When people succeed, it is because of hard work ?
It's too ... confused...
I think, simple way to say this idea - "People become successful thanks of their hard work."
It's too ... confused...
I think, simple way to say this idea - "People become successful thanks of their hard work."
Sofico sorry, love. I have no power to change a topic question. X
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Sofico yes)))
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I agree with you)) especcially in this point - It also depends on your talent, charm, ability to resist stress and self-confidence.
when you first meet people - maybe when you see people for the first time?
I think that not success is created not only by luck and hard work - without this one
I agree with you)) especcially in this point - It also depends on your talent, charm, ability to resist stress and self-confidence.
when you first meet people - maybe when you see people for the first time?
I think that not success is created not only by luck and hard work - without this one
SIRI thx a lot again))
Maybe I should say when people see you for the first time?
Or when an employer?
Maybe I should say when people see you for the first time?
Or when an employer?
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I like the variant with the employer)
I like the variant with the employer)
SIRI done. Thank you)))